Read my poem please! Tell me what you think. Thank you.?

Hello, you didn't ask for C/C so I will keep it to myself, Ha Ha. I really enjoyed reading this and I can relate to it's meaning a whole lot. Especially the last stanza as age,grey hair and wrinkles know me well. Ha Ha again. I do however need to be honest for reasons that I think you know. It still needs some work. Although the image and feeling is all there. 85 is the best I can go, as this poem is presented to me right now. Keep writing and creating and I sure did feel like I was setting out on my porch.